11/29/2015 9 Comments CRITIQUE 5These two images are related by what Specific Art/Design Elements?
Also: Discuss the compositional strengths of each and areas of improvement:
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Montana M
11/29/2015 05:19:27 pm
The use of perspective is good in both pieces but more effective in the second because of how it was applied. The image is more appealing/ intersting. The red in the second car is well applied because the red is also in the tail lights. Same for the headlights in the first image. Repetition woo.
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Katie m
11/29/2015 05:29:50 pm
They are related with negative space. They also share the use of one color. The vanishing point on the first picture makes it good compositionally. The picture in the background could be taken out. The bottom image also has a vanishing point which makes it strong. The darker pieces of paper could be taken out, they are a little distracting.
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Michael
11/29/2015 06:30:30 pm
Good coloration on both peaces but probably needs more detals on both peaces such as car rims and bumpers.
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Gianna
11/30/2015 08:18:08 am
I think that the one on the bottom has a stronger and more appealing composition for several reasons. First the focal point is not in the middle, off center, and it has a dramatic, far to close, scale. Also red is a great color choice because it immediately catches the eye.
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Ian
12/3/2015 03:47:13 pm
they are both pretty interesting. i agree with Gianna when she says that a primary color would make the one on top pop (or to the left) it is good and clean though, in a splatter sort of way where the paint isn't touching the inside of the truck. the one on the right is good to. it would be better if it weren't a Prius though (winky face).
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michael campo
12/3/2015 11:35:36 pm
The wheels on the first image are weird looking and the composition is kind of boring looking. I like the more noticeable paper on the second one and how the more closely line up with the lines on the car.
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Logan
12/4/2015 03:32:48 pm
Both pop in there own individual way. I love the splatter paint on the first one. Whoever the artist is really knows what he's doing. I do agree that the Prius is more perspectively affective. The Prius was also cleaner and more appealing to the eye. The top one would look better if it was a little cleaner and had more detail.
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Brittany
12/6/2015 10:35:12 am
I feel like the contrast in the Orange one is more effective but the line quality is better in the red. The red car perspective is more appealing . I also like how the Orange image is more blocked in.
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Jess C
12/8/2015 11:25:07 am
I like the orange in the first one, but those two peices of darker paper are really distracting me. I like the vanishing point in the second, it especially looks like it's going somewhere instead of just sitting there on the paper. The red is nice and it looks really neat. I like the effect with the color in the first.
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