Brittany M
10/26/2015 08:46:04 pm
The railway provides movement. The gradation of darks and lights have a great contrast. But the rail should be a little more to the side. Rather than it being in the center. It just feels a little off.
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Montana M
10/27/2015 11:36:22 am
I agree Brittany. The whitest part of the curve pushed a little farther from the clouds as well
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Michael Curtis
10/27/2015 11:38:48 am
Great use of darks and lights has movement and draws the eye.
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Jack Miller
10/27/2015 11:49:40 am
Entuta la bildo estas tres bone kaj tres bela, sed al iuj lokoj, gi estas tro mallumo.
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Gianna Martucci-Fink
10/27/2015 11:51:03 am
Stong leading prove to useful..Leading the veiwer away from the destination. Also the contrast between the strong white lines and the dark black, becomes an instance attention grabber.
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Michael Campo
11/1/2015 03:13:35 pm
would make the grass darker to have the white pop out more.
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Liz Redd
11/10/2015 07:52:47 am
I would maybe make the white rail brighter in the highlights to add more contrast. Not too much or else it would be distracting, but at least a little bit because I feel like the highlight in the cloud is brighter than the highlight on the rail.
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Courtney Unruh
11/13/2015 05:31:31 pm
The picture draws my eyes in instantly. The curve carries your eye straight through the picture leading to me as a viewer as to what the story is behind such a photo.
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Logan ressler
12/11/2015 12:25:33 pm
Very nice perspective. I love the white lines next to the very dark grass and the clouds are just beautiful. This is a great shot. Does well in b&w
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